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1 Incoming Storm: Part II on Sat Aug 25, 2018 5:42 pm

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Voyage Name: Incoming Storm: Part II
Location: Lulusia Kingdom
Participant(s): Others
Description: Fiora upon her battle with a swordsman in an alleyway  takes him to the marine outpost in Lulusia Kingdom, for the first two days she recoveries while  they torture the man for information but he doesn't speak until finally one of his allies was brought in and tortured as well, after a certain period he broke and revealed that he was a revolutionary agent and that the deal Fiora previously heard was one where the revolutionaries of his squad and a crew of pirates were teaming up and the revolutionaries promised powerful guns, and supplies in exchange for the pirate's cooperation. Fiora and a small marine team are dispatched to the supply location drop to intercept the revolutionaries from taking the supplies.  
Enemies: 15-17(0-0-0-0-0)
Goal: To stop the revolutionaries from getting the supplies and arresting them.

2 Re: Incoming Storm: Part II on Tue Aug 28, 2018 6:46 am

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Just to note that I'd appreciate a link to the first part once you hand this in, for context.

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3 Re: Incoming Storm: Part II on Sat Sep 15, 2018 4:38 pm

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Part 1

Finished

Sofia asked for part one for context so here it is, as well as the actual voyage for this application.

4 Re: Incoming Storm: Part II on Sun Sep 16, 2018 2:50 pm

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Nicely done, well executed. Some issues with run on sentences. I liked your characters and their interactions.

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5 Re: Incoming Storm: Part II on Sun Sep 16, 2018 4:01 pm

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@Melly wrote:Nicely done, well executed. Some issues with run on sentences. I liked your characters and their interactions.

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-nods- feels much more fleshed out personality wise. This is good.

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