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1 Incoming Storm: Part I on Thu Aug 23, 2018 7:45 pm

Nise


Nise
Voyage Name: Incoming Storm: Part I
Location: Lulusia Kingdom
Participant(s): Solo(Possibly with others)
Description: After recently just being promoted to Ensign in the marine's in Lulusia Kingdom Fiora is set to patrol around the common grounds to keep a lookout for suspicious activity, luckily after traveling to a local tavern she catches a lucky break and hears on-goings of a shady deal happening, seeking more information she corners a small group of men in an alley hoping to gain more information out of them
Enemies: 3-4 fodder men(0-0-0-0-0)
Boss of the group:



Name:Timothy Wimber

Personality:Stubborn and Loyal

Attributes: 1-0-2-0-1
Goal: The goal of this voyage is to gather information on the possible ongoings of the common grounds illegal activity.

2 Re: Incoming Storm: Part I on Fri Aug 24, 2018 8:31 am

Amelia Velts

Vagabond
Vagabond

Amelia Velts

3 Re: Incoming Storm: Part I on Fri Aug 24, 2018 2:50 pm

Melly

Shichibukai
Shichibukai

Melly
go for it

4 Re: Incoming Storm: Part I on Sat Aug 25, 2018 1:03 pm

Nise


Nise

5 Re: Incoming Storm: Part I on Tue Aug 28, 2018 7:39 am

Lady Sofia

Vagabond
Vagabond

Lady Sofia
Graders grading graders lol.

It was a good read. Pretty standard structure of find dude, then beat dude, but One Piece is an anime with fighting all the time anyways so it's appropriate. The key is that despite that there's fighting, there's more meaning to the fighting itself. Which, there was a smidgen here, but I was hoping for a bit more. Hopefully we get to see that in the future parts.

Pretty good anyways.

Beli: 17,000,000
Doriki: 1
Prestige: 1  

1/2

6 Re: Incoming Storm: Part I on Wed Aug 29, 2018 11:17 am

Nise


Nise
2/2 needed @Kaito, @Melly

7 Re: Incoming Storm: Part I on Wed Aug 29, 2018 5:00 pm

Kaito

Supernova
Supernova

Kaito
@Lady Sofia wrote:Graders grading graders lol.

It was a good read. Pretty standard structure of find dude, then beat dude, but One Piece is an anime with fighting all the time anyways so it's appropriate. The key is that despite that there's fighting, there's more meaning to the fighting itself. Which, there was a smidgen here, but I was hoping for a bit more. Hopefully we get to see that in the future parts.

Pretty good anyways.

Beli: 17,000,000
Doriki: 1
Prestige: 1  

1/2

I think Sofia's accurate, I would've like a bit more balance with the depth of the characters in the story presented, though, overall it was A-1. 2/2

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