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1 God is dead [voyage] on Mon Aug 20, 2018 7:44 pm



Voyage Name: Faith sells
Location: Baltigo
Participant(s): Solo
Description: A traveling “holy man” is selling relics that disappear in the morning
Enemies: A traveling "holy man"
Goal: Goal is for Spook to catch the con artist that's deceiving the questionable people of the black market

2 Re: God is dead [voyage] on Tue Aug 21, 2018 6:22 am

Amelia Velts


Amelia Velts
go forth and do his thing~!

3 Re: God is dead [voyage] on Sat Sep 01, 2018 7:03 am




4 Re: God is dead [voyage] on Sun Sep 02, 2018 4:04 pm




5 Re: God is dead [voyage] on Mon Sep 03, 2018 3:35 am

Lady Sofia


Lady Sofia
How do you even pronounce Nietzche? Niet-che? Nee-chegh? Anyways:

Demoted to a topic because of it's extension, but up to the 2/2er to confirm it for sure. Doesn't do much besides count differently for missions tbh, but this is also part of a small campaign to let people know that topics exist - you don't need to register them. You can just do them whenever you want. Voyages should be a bit more significant than this here and we have been a bit too lenient about it in the past. But, I'm not going to reduce your rewards for you here because this whole thing is relatively new (and obscure to the general public, even if its in plain view and such), just the classification of the thread itself.

Also, it's Marquez, not Marqueez : P. Glad to see literary references! I don't think I should particularly boost or nerf rewards based on this, because I believe that "quality" here should be in the direction of making better "popular literature" of a sort, things that anyone can understand and that's the most common in RP imo, instead of higher and higher proof of literary competence of the academic kind. So, oh well. It's just neutral lol.

Anyway, it was a cool read. It was fun to see how he handled the task and was successful, just, it would need to clearly show larger relevance to a larger story (or be/become very important in itself) to be a higher-classified thread.

But, in the mindset of it being a topic to begin with, it was a really good topic.

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6 Re: God is dead [voyage] on Mon Sep 03, 2018 4:14 am



This topic certainly rides that line between voyage and regular topic, but I'm willing to consider it closer to a minor voyage and grade it as one instead of considering it a regular topic.

Moving on to your actual grading I've heard a few things about your writing and from talking to you I came into this expecting to see a certain quality from the topic. I'm glad to say that I was not disappointed and despite the contents not being my cup of tea your style of writing kept me interested and worked in a way that I don't see often. Sofia's rewards are fine with me and I'll be adding them 2/2

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