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1 The Fall to Level Six (Gran Voyage) on Mon Aug 20, 2018 8:19 am

Yuurei

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Gran Voyage Type: NPC
Gran Voyage Name: The Fall to Level Six
Gran Voyage Location: Impel Down
Level: 2
Gran Voyage Description: Not everyone can win; Yuurei noticed that one of the woman in level five is being harassed in level five. The woman here usually stick to themselves, and it was why the men in this floor stood away from them. This woman in particular had fallen from the level four and to level, managing to somehow live the fall. She has been on her own ever since, which brings her dilemma; there are a few men on this level that do not follow Yuurei’s rules of peace and harassed this woman. He comes across this, and tries to defuse the situation in a nonviolent, which fails, and leaves Yuurei to an all-out brawl with the men who were there. While going through everything the power of the men and Yuurei a bunch of guards would appear and stop the fight from happening and take Yuurei and the girl away.
NPCing: N/A
Enemies: Armin 6/6/5/4/6 Jack 6/7/5/4/5
Goal: NPC
My reason for ending up at level six for my mission as a WILL OF D.
A lost in his book even though it will be somewhat fairly even, but also opens his mind to know that there is still room to grow.



Last edited by Yuurei on Mon Aug 27, 2018 12:53 am; edited 1 time in total

2 Re: The Fall to Level Six (Gran Voyage) on Tue Aug 21, 2018 6:31 am

Amelia Velts

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A prisoner such as yourself falling to level six would be quite a big event, I'm going to give this a 1/2 but I would like some more information.

2/2 needed @Lady Sofia, @Odin, @Judan, @Kaito

3 Re: The Fall to Level Six (Gran Voyage) on Mon Aug 27, 2018 12:51 am

Aku Soku Zan

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Remove the portion about the breaking a hole in the floor. One. You'd die from the fall. Two. If you lived you'd honestly be killed on the spot for doing it.

4 Re: The Fall to Level Six (Gran Voyage) on Mon Aug 27, 2018 12:53 am

Yuurei

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I edited @hannibal

5 Re: The Fall to Level Six (Gran Voyage) on Mon Aug 27, 2018 1:06 am

Aku Soku Zan

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Thanks. Carry on.

6 Re: The Fall to Level Six (Gran Voyage) on Mon Aug 27, 2018 1:24 am

Yuurei

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7 Re: The Fall to Level Six (Gran Voyage) on Mon Aug 27, 2018 11:17 pm

Winged Menace

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Hello, I'll be your grader. So the story itself was told at a good pace and was a good read, the characters created for this interacted well and came together to string the story into something I found to be an enjoyable read. Grammer errors weren't very relevant in this thread so well done on that, but as for your blade's I'm afraid any actions with them have to be overlooked as there's no way you would have had them being at lv 4 of impel down.

32,000,000M Beli (Reduced rewards)

+1 Doriki (It was a tough battle that pushed you while already being drained by the scorching heat of level four.)

+2 Prestige (Your now a prisoner of level 6, as far as any pirate is concern your now considered the worst of the bad.)

2/2 @Kaito, @"Lady Sofia, @Melly

8 Re: The Fall to Level Six (Gran Voyage) on Tue Aug 28, 2018 5:19 am

Yuurei

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I was at level 5. The reason I have blades is from my multiple gran voyages and voyages from before this. I didn’t just spawn them into existence.

9 Re: The Fall to Level Six (Gran Voyage) on Tue Aug 28, 2018 6:09 am

Melly

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I'll bump up the rewards to 60,000,000 beli.


Over all I enjoyed it, it was my fave from your impel series.

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