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1 One Last Steal (Voyage) on Mon Aug 13, 2018 10:07 am

Yuurei

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Voyage Name: One Last Steal
Location:Impel Down
Participant(s): Solo  
Description: Yuurei had helped out the guards with a situation, but this time things backfired with smuggling the stuff back to him. Instead, the guard was caught trying to bring back his sword, and was brought to level five to be treated as a prisoner. Little did the other guards who weren’t the loop, the guard had hidden things with him to escape the area. Yuurei tries to find the guard that had become a prisoner, which leads to a mystery for him to solve.

2 Re: One Last Steal (Voyage) on Tue Aug 14, 2018 6:43 pm

Aku Soku Zan

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He was caught trying to bring a prisoner a weapon. Everyone on the staff would know of this crime and him sneaking anything onto the floor won't be possible.

3 Re: One Last Steal (Voyage) on Tue Aug 14, 2018 8:28 pm

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He didn't sneak it in it was already hidden inside level five and he's trying to get it to free himself...don't worry its just storytelling Yuurei is giving the keys back to the guards

@hannibal

4 Re: One Last Steal (Voyage) on Thu Aug 16, 2018 7:45 am

Bojack

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Fine long as you're not using this to go towards your escape since that must be done in a GV

5 Re: One Last Steal (Voyage) on Thu Aug 16, 2018 4:06 pm

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http://strawhats.forumotion.com/t2474-one-last-steal-voyage#15921

Topic is completed.

I'm using my thief occupation for this as well. This allows whatever beli I get in the end to be multiplied by 1.5 for a maximum of 30,000,000 for the month. I currently have used it in this thread

http://strawhats.forumotion.com/t2374-how-did-they-get-that-voyage

which brings the remaining amount to what I can get for this month to, 17,235,000 beli. This is also considered a crafting topic.

6 Re: One Last Steal (Voyage) on Fri Aug 17, 2018 3:57 pm

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over all well written. Other than that, I hate reading your Impel threads. They don't come off at all of you being in prison, not only prison but one of the places that is supposed to be hell for those of your level. There was one mention of the heat, no mention of really anything to do with the level itself and it kind of just makes it seem like a walk in the park. The longer your there, the worse heat becomes, its not something your body fully adjusts to, heat stroke, dehydration, pain caused by heat, none of this seems to bother you and really it kinda just over all brings the vibe of impel down. You say it "feels like home" so its assumed you've been there a while, yet theres nothing really giving that vibe, not even the other prisoners. I get your using the old "its making me stronger" route, but It just comes off as power play moves. Its like you don't know how to or don't like to have your character in weakened states or in ways that could really bind him and force him to open in different ways through the pain and journey of Impel. More so its like all your topics connect to a "He's invincible, nothing effects him" journey instead.

15,000,000 Beli
10 Cp


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7 Re: One Last Steal (Voyage) on Fri Aug 17, 2018 9:29 pm

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He has had multiple voyages and grand voyages at this point in Impel Down, each with a massive amount of content, so I'm not too surprised that through his character's growth during that time, he has progressively become more accustomed to the place.

The writing is a bit deadpan as usual, but oh well. It's not entirely terrible though in my opinion, it's still one entire cohesive story, that plays into the overall plot that you have been building up until now.

Adjusting Beli to:

Beli: 30,000,000

Thief reward is 15,000,000

2/2

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