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1 GV: A New Friend on Wed Aug 08, 2018 2:31 pm

Kahh

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Gran Voyage Type: NPC
Gran Voyage Name: A New Friend
Gran Voyage Location: Momoiro Island
Level: 2
Gran Voyage Description:
I: Kahseh and Bunda decide to move further into the island, exploring the forests a bit more before they reach the towns and whatnot. On the way they run into a group of women dressed as men who attack them. These women are pirates who want to steal whatever they can from Kahseh and Bunda they go by the name of "Thunder Dyke Pirates"

II. After beating these pirates and interrogating them on while they're out here, they tell Kahseh that they have crew mates hunting a rare Avian species in Rosada passage, a mountain in the middle of the island shaped like a heart. Kahseh decide that him and Bunda will see what it's all about and perhaps run into another village worthy of raiding.

III. After traveling and seeing that there were hardly any villages on or around the mountain, they continue forward to eventually come to a waterfall where they see a group of about 12 manly women in a fight with a large and beautiful avian. Apparently they shot at one of its wings so it is unable to fly. Seeing that it is surrounded Kahseh and Bunda battle the crew to help the creature but at the cost of Bunda's life. (Loses Bunda as NPC) After the deed is done, Kahseh mourns his lost friend...and all for an animal. As if the Avian understood human emotions, it comforts Kahseh, showing it's appreciation for saving it's life. From then on it becomes his companion. (Obtains  the Avian as a new NPC)
NPCing: No



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2 Re: GV: A New Friend on Wed Aug 08, 2018 6:36 pm

Kaito

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Right now Jordsand is the centre piece of our actual event, so if you're going to travel their, you'll have to do so via the event sequencing topics provided. You can't start here. Cheers.

3 Re: GV: A New Friend on Thu Aug 09, 2018 8:19 pm

Kahh

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Okay, changed for ya

4 Re: GV: A New Friend on Fri Aug 10, 2018 4:09 am

Kaito

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Go forth and progress!

5 Re: GV: A New Friend on Mon Aug 13, 2018 8:29 pm

Kahh

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http://strawhats.forumotion.com/t2439-a-new-friend-i-ii#15549

Part 1 & 2 down. Made it so that the last enemy was the one to tell us the info, seemed more realistic

6 Re: GV: A New Friend on Tue Aug 14, 2018 6:58 pm

Aku Soku Zan

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For Grand Voyages they won't be graded in parts at this time and once everything is finished or you are done will a grade be given. You are free to do the parts in different topics. But I will say it was a extremely good read. I however am not a person that has been following your things until now so it would've been nice to see more of your relationship with your NPC and overall who they are. Since they will meet their end at the end of the GV.

7 Re: GV: A New Friend on Wed Aug 15, 2018 11:01 am

Kahh

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@Hannibal, my bad! Thanks for the advice bro. Tried to use it but it may have been too late to show the relationship deeply, I tried though, aye.

Part 1-2: http://strawhats.forumotion.com/t2439-a-new-friend-i-ii#15549

Part 2-3: http://strawhats.forumotion.com/t2461-a-new-friend-ii-iii#15848

GV donezo.

8 Re: GV: A New Friend on Thu Aug 16, 2018 10:52 am

Lady Sofia

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Well written on the technical and storytelling level. Pity that Bunda had to die. Then allegorical phoenix symbology goooo.

It was a biiiiit short when it comes to bonding with someone to acquire an NPC though, in my opinion. I didn't really feel that the two made a connection beyond the initial spark, and I really hope to see more develop between the two to reinforce that.

Beli: 20,500,000
Doriki: 1 - Combat lesbians
NPC: Acquired.
Other: Bunda is dead.

1/2

9 Re: GV: A New Friend on Thu Aug 16, 2018 5:43 pm

Kaito

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@Lady Sofia wrote:Well written on the technical and storytelling level. Pity that Bunda had to die. Then allegorical phoenix symbology goooo.

It was a biiiiit short when it comes to bonding with someone to acquire an NPC though, in my opinion. I didn't really feel that the two made a connection beyond the initial spark, and I really hope to see more develop between the two to reinforce that.

Beli: 20,500,000
Doriki: 1 - Combat lesbians
NPC: Acquired.
Other: Bunda is dead.

1/2

Approved. 2/2

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