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1 Mashyuu in: Brand New Eyes on Sat Aug 04, 2018 6:42 pm

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Gran Voyage Type: Story (Haki Awakening)
Gran Voyage Name: Mashyuu in: Brand New Eyes
Gran Voyage Location: Jordsand
Level: 2
Gran Voyage Description:
To prepare for the trials Mashyuu knows he must face as a Captain and protector, the Winged pirate reflects on his past experiences nearly awakening something his people called Mantra and his allies call Haki. He wanders to an island alone and finds a grotto to meditate at, reflect on his life and think on how to improve. What he doesn't know is that a massive monster that has wings like his lives in the grotto and when it returns to its home from a hunt, it's not happy about Mashyuu being there. Learning quickly that he isn't fast enough to out move it, and barely strong enough to hurt it, he needs to learn how to predict its movements before its too late.

Act 1: Mashyuu talks with Harley and Sky about what they might face on Jordsand and the trio quickly realize that they aren't up to the task as they currently are. Each of them set out to grow as people and pirates.

Act 2: Mashyuu finds a grotto on a near by island and uses the peaceful land to meditate and try to harness that power he knows is dwelling deep in his soul.

Act 3: A large beast breaks into the Grotto and quickly angers from seeing Mashyuu in its home, it attacks and forces Mashyuu to advance as a person and use a power that has been festering in his spirit in order to survive the attack and come back to his crew.
NPCing: None

2 Re: Mashyuu in: Brand New Eyes on Sun Aug 05, 2018 6:47 am

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Go forth and do the thing.

3 Re: Mashyuu in: Brand New Eyes on Sat Aug 11, 2018 12:28 pm

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4 Re: Mashyuu in: Brand New Eyes on Mon Aug 13, 2018 6:45 pm

Aku Soku Zan

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This was not a level 2 GV and I am even hesitant to grade it as a level 1. It isn't your writing it is the story that you tell. I'm fine with the take of you mastering a ability you've been grazing at through other topics; I actually enjoy that approach you've taken. However something like this could've been done in a Voyage or normal topic. And also comes off as you just wanting to reach a set WC instead of letting whatever you were doing flow till it ended.

Beli: 35,000,000
Doriki: 1 (Taking into account the amount you have and he degree of actual difficulty I can't aware much at all.)
Prestige: 0
Haki: Awarded.

1/2

5 Re: Mashyuu in: Brand New Eyes on Mon Aug 13, 2018 6:46 pm

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Hannibal wrote:This was not a level 2 GV and I am even hesitant to grade it as a level 1. It isn't your writing it is the story that you tell. I'm fine with the take of you mastering a ability you've been grazing at through other topics; I actually enjoy that approach you've taken. However something like this could've been done in a Voyage or normal topic. And also comes off as you just wanting to reach a set WC instead of letting whatever you were doing flow till it ended.

Beli: 35,000,000
Doriki: 1 (Taking into account the amount you have and he degree of actual difficulty I can't aware much at all.)
Prestige: 0
Haki: Awarded.

1/2

Agreed. You're a big time pirate now gotta be making big moves.

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