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1 (V) New Born on Thu Aug 02, 2018 11:45 pm

Odd


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Voyage Name:New Born
Location: Baltigo
Participant(s): Solo
Description: Regalia will wing a surgical procedure on herself and Macgyver up a healing ointment using general things.

2 Re: (V) New Born on Thu Aug 09, 2018 8:32 am

Odd


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bump for love

3 Re: (V) New Born on Thu Aug 09, 2018 8:56 am

Lady Sofia

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4 Re: (V) New Born on Mon Aug 13, 2018 9:17 am

Odd


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5 Re: (V) New Born on Sat Aug 18, 2018 1:09 pm

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Hello Odd! First time I grade you. Let's get in into it:

A few mistakes here and there, for example the capitalization and apostrophe missing here:

. sanitary was a concept that didn’t have any place in this germaphobes nightmare.

But it's an amount below tolerance, so you're clear. Just be careful with it in the future.

Overall, it was alright. Decent. I liked how you put emphasis on the grit involved in doing self-surgery, and how it played into showing facets of her character. I'm proud to have you on board with us on the forum, and I hope to see more misadventures from our (not-)doctor!

Beli: 12,500,000
CP: 10

1/2

6 Re: (V) New Born on Mon Aug 20, 2018 8:48 pm

Odd


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thanks for taking some time to grade my voyage post Smile

7 Re: (V) New Born on Tue Sep 04, 2018 6:28 am

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That's some... uh... rudimentary doctoring. Ouch. ._.

2/2

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