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1 The Phantom Raiders in: Blending In on Thu Aug 02, 2018 11:40 pm

Batman4560


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Voyage Name: The Phantom Raiders in: Blending in.
Location: Jordsand
Participant(s): Others
Description: The Phantom Raiders have landed on Jorsand and the Skycleaver is nestled between two smaller islands outside of the mainland. On either side of them are two smaller mountains that provide a good hiding spot but one of the islands has a small marine base atop it. To keep the location of their ship secret, and make sure nobody reports that Lady Sofia is with them, some of the Phantom Raiders launch a sneak attack against the marines but an old rival is leading the marines here and has a score to settle with Mashyuu.

2 Re: The Phantom Raiders in: Blending In on Fri Aug 03, 2018 4:49 am

Kaito

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This is good. Go forth

3 Re: The Phantom Raiders in: Blending In on Sun Aug 19, 2018 6:06 pm

Lady Sofia

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This was put up for grading in Voyage Registration.

Link: http://strawhats.forumotion.com/t2338-the-phantom-raiders-in-blending-in

Don't forget to link the thread to the reg and vice-versa.

(Also, not grading this because it's related to myself, in case anyone was wondering.)

4 Re: The Phantom Raiders in: Blending In on Sun Aug 19, 2018 8:17 pm

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I can't believe this got put up wrong Here is the correct link to the finished topic

http://strawhats.forumotion.com/t2317-the-phantom-raiders-in-blending-in?nid=2012#16208

5 Re: The Phantom Raiders in: Blending In on Tue Aug 21, 2018 8:46 am

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Hey, I'll be your grader for this. So the interactions between Mashyuu and Elias were pretty good and I felt it expressed the difference and thought the process of both of them while still retaining the respect of a captain and his crew member, both of you made quite a bit of grammar errors with Mashyuu being just a bit more but the content of the thread and how it connects to a past experience for Mashyuu and a daunting choice for Elias in the future I believe more than makes up for it.


Mashyuu

16,000,000 Beli (Reduced rewards for bounty)

+1 Prestige (Assaulting a marine base I believe and succeeding in making fool of a captain and her second in command is worth this, and also increased marine awareness of your presence on the island.)

+1 Doriki (You had to struggle a bit against the captain and then also had to deal with her second.)

0 Bounty (Nothing really spectacular for a man of your status)


Elias

25,000,000M Beli

+2 Prestige (Not only have you already wanted for your origins but the fact that you keep getting "Kidnapped" by the captain of the Phantom Raider pirate's makes you that much more renowned I believe.)

0 Doriki (You didn't fight so much but more so helped Mashyuu to a lesser extent under the pretense of trying to help the marine's.)

Ghost

You didn't contribute anything to the thread and was just kinda there, the few posts you did make were full of grammar errors.

2,000,000M (reduced due to grammar errors)

2/2 needed @Kaito, @Judan, @Sym, @Odin

6 Re: The Phantom Raiders in: Blending In on Wed Aug 22, 2018 5:25 am

Kaito

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Grace Vermilion wrote:Hey, I'll be your grader for this. So the interactions between Mashyuu and Elias were pretty good and I felt it expressed the difference and thought the process of both of them while still retaining the respect of a captain and his crew member, both of you made quite a bit of grammar errors with Mashyuu being just a bit more but the content of the thread and how it connects to a past experience for Mashyuu and a daunting choice for Elias in the future I believe more than makes up for it.


Mashyuu

16,000,000 Beli (Reduced rewards for bounty)


10,000,000 Welcome to the big leagues now Mashyuu, having a big name tied to you means you're going to have to be doing something pretty amazing for big payouts.

+1 Prestige (Assaulting a marine base I believe and succeeding in making fool of a captain and her second in command is worth this, and also increased marine awareness of your presence on the island.)

+1 Doriki (You had to struggle a bit against the captain and then also had to deal with her second.)


No Doriki Rewards, though you struggled, it wasn't something it'd say push you pass your current level of Doriki. You're experienced now, going to have to takedown those who are more your size.


0 Bounty (Nothing really spectacular for a man of your status)

Everything else is fine.

Elias

25,000,000M Beli

+2 Prestige (Not only have you already wanted for your origins but the fact that you keep getting "Kidnapped" by the captain of the Phantom Raider pirate's makes you that much more renowned I believe.)

0 Doriki (You didn't fight so much but more so helped Mashyuu to a lesser extent under the pretense of trying to help the marine's.)

Ghost

You didn't contribute anything to the thread and was just kinda there, the few posts you did make were full of grammar errors.

2,000,000M (reduced due to grammar errors)

2/2 needed @Kaito, @Judan, @Sym, @Odin

Everyone else is fine.

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