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1 Trial Vial Supplial on Wed Aug 01, 2018 5:49 am

Lady Sofia

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Voyage Name: Trial Vial Supplial
Location: Jordsand
Participant(s): With others
Description:

Sofia is starting out in the world of medicine, and she will request help from the new friend she has gotten from the Hunter Jacquelin encounter: Doctor Kouse, aka Dr. K. With his help, she will begin her studies in how to treat people, as well as treat a few of the abundant amount of injured people that there is on Jordsand, given its constant state of warfare.

2 Re: Trial Vial Supplial on Wed Aug 01, 2018 2:27 pm

Melly

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go for it

3 Re: Trial Vial Supplial on Sun Aug 05, 2018 2:46 pm

Lady Sofia

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4 Re: Trial Vial Supplial on Mon Aug 06, 2018 2:24 pm

Melly

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Tut tut

Post 4 is below site word count regulation.

Over all I enjoyed it, trying to push those products. sell sell sell, get that old lady money!!.

over all though K's posts to me filled in a lot of the description that Sofia's was lacking, I'd like to see some more mannerisms and general detail from Sofia, a lot of your writing comes from liners. An example.

Sofia then got into a combat stance, holding her Poise.


Whats the combat stance? how are you standing? A lot of the description is missing in posts and I think by filling those parts in your writing could grow to a whole new level. Other than that I loved it.

Sofia

- 25,000,000 Beli
12 Cp
1 Doriki [Given for the development of your second occupation]

K

30,000,000 Beli
12 CP
1 Doriki [Given for your way of teaching your [non fruit] skills.


1/2

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5 Re: Trial Vial Supplial on Tue Aug 07, 2018 5:03 am

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