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31 Re: Bounty Board on Fri Mar 30, 2018 6:51 am

Name: Unkillable Simon, and his friend Poison Mo
Participants: Maybe me, and Zeed.

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32 Re: Bounty Board on Fri Mar 30, 2018 6:54 am

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@Kappa wrote:Name: smiling jack
Participants: kappa

If this one still counts as taken by hannibal then ill take kaguya instead

@Kappa your currently on Sandy correct, you'd have to move to the location of the bounty to take them on, just a note.

@Jui$y Crow wrote:Name: Unkillable Simon, and his friend Poison Mo
Participants: Maybe me, and Zeed.

@Jui$y Crow This bounty is already currently being taken.


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33 Re: Bounty Board on Mon Apr 02, 2018 4:58 am

Summary: Overall, it was an interesting thread up to certain points that I had a few problems with. I thought the introduction of the Vice Admiral would've been handled with a bit more urgency, also the angle of Beckham being Lina's uncle was so random, it couldn't help but leave a bitter taste in my mouth as a reader. Especially, as a reader whose been reading Skip tease about her marine family connections for so long ICly, it just seemed odd for her uncle to just happen to be there.

Aside from that, it was incredibly enjoyable. The fight scenes with Mo and Skippy were entertaining but I think more work could've been placed in Mo's character than more than just the 'dumb blonde' routine. Her perception was fairly average, making her of above average intelligence, after awhile, I figured she'd would've been much more accustomed to Lina's slight utterances of shaking the earth. I love the exchange between Bazil and Jackal about being stronger. Bazil just saw it as power he needs to obtain and Jackal viewed it more as he'd always known his place in the world.

The whole Bonnie and Clyde aesthetic with Mo and Simon, genius. They seemed incredibly hardcore and ridiculous strange at points, which makes them represent the One Piece universe so well.

Rewards: Beckham truly captured Simon, so as such, no reward money will be given out for Simon's bounty. The Marines have taken him under their wing for much more 'useful' purposes. However, I will take account Simon's bounty partially in the rewards since all of this damage to the Casino was once again, blamed on Bazil, Jackal and this time Lina came along for the ride. Leave Rainy Diners Alone!

@ai47 @dingdongditcher @Kaito I'm going to split Mo's bounty right down the middle. Luckily, Jackal turned her in alive so the full reward is eligible. Though the part about how she was turned in was a little rushed, I'll take it this time around. That makes an even 45 Million Split for each of ya.

Bounty: Well, Bazil was already seen as a bigger threat than Mo. His bounty will be rounded up to an even 150,000,000.

Lina's bounty will now be warranted 15,000,000 Million increase.

Jackal's bounty will now be warranted 10,000,000 Million increase. (With Jackal's Rockstar Badge, that puts it to a 15 Million Bounty. Sucks for you though Jackal, Rockstar doesn't stack with Double ticket :p)

Prestige/Doriki: 1 Prestige | 1 Doriki (It'll be harder to get these now)

In the case of Simon, due to plot reasons, his bounty will still be instated but it'll be said his bounty was frozen. Catch the hint. I'll give ya'll a 15,000,000 Million Beli increase for the try which is little under 10% of Simon's bounty. Bringing ya'll to 60 Million. Jackal's also stated he's going to use his Double Rewards Ticket.

Final Payout:

Lina (@dingdongditcher): 120 Million Beli | 30 Million Bounty Increase | 2 Doriki & 2 Prestige
Bazil(@ai47): 120 Million Beli | 150,000,000 Flat | 2 Doriki & 2 Prestige
Jackal(Kaito): 120 Million Beli | 15 Million Bounty Increase | 2 Doriki & 2 Prestige


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34 Re: Bounty Board on Thu Apr 12, 2018 10:45 pm

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35 Re: Bounty Board on Sun Apr 29, 2018 10:09 am

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Name:Queen kayuga
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Side note I want to add this bounty to my voyage

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36 Re: Bounty Board on Sun Apr 29, 2018 12:27 pm

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You can take the bounty Ghost, but you can't implement it into a separate voyage.

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37 Re: Bounty Board on Sat May 05, 2018 6:21 pm

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Name: Slippery Aiko and Diver Aido
Participants: Just me


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38 Re: Bounty Board on Sat May 05, 2018 10:47 pm

@Noctis wrote:Name: Slippery Aiko and Diver Aido
Participants: Just me

It's all yours.


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39 Re: Bounty Board on Thu May 17, 2018 12:06 pm

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@Noctis wrote:Name: Slippery Aiko and Diver Aido
Participants: Just me

Updating: @Devroux will now be joining me.


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40 Re: Bounty Board on Sat May 19, 2018 8:55 pm

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@Ghost wrote:Name:Queen kayuga
Participants:Only me

Side note I want to add this bounty to my voyage

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Summary: @Ghost Usually, I try to grade on a custom curve based on how each person Role Plays, independent from my own opinions but even doing so, I'm highly disappointed in this bounty outing. The grammar and sentence structure was horrible, at times, I couldn't even pick up where you where or when scenes were transitioning without reading it at least three times and when I finally got it, it was incredibly drab.

Even though Kaguya would've have all Non-Priority stats, I feel like you saw that as an opportunity to one hit her and simply move on by making the word count, that's not what this site is about. It's about creating genuine stories for your character's progression and for others to enjoy the read.

I don't want to trash your work any further but I'm definitely not going to approve this bounty.

Furthermore for the next 30 days, your banned from taking any other bounties until you get the swing of developing your RP via voyages/grand voyages.

This thread is voided. Please next time, take proper time to develop your plotlines before submitting them to staff. We take our time out of our day to grade these and frankly, I'm highly insulted you thought this was enough.

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Unless you guys see different, here's the link to the thread:

http://strawhats.forumotion.com/t1192-chapter-1flame-commander-vs-the-queen


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41 Re: Bounty Board on Sat May 19, 2018 8:57 pm

Nope I was just gonna say the same thing, you just happened to beat me to it.

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42 Re: Bounty Board on Sat May 19, 2018 11:30 pm

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That was epic as always o. O grammar was on point kaito and bats lbvs this was a set up into my next grand voyage.

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43 Re: Bounty Board on Fri May 25, 2018 11:59 am

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Gold. wrote:Name: White Snake Shoda
Participants: Me, Myself, and Fidel

http://strawhats.forumotion.com/t710-do-what-thou-wiltbounty

next time link back when you're done with the IC topic. I shouldn't be doing it for you.

the topic s a good read, but only after getting used to your flashbacks that come with no real warnings or specifications of where or when they are. I found myself having to backtrack a few times due to them and also you have more grammatical errors than average scattered amongst your post. Words left unfinished or just completely wrong leaving me to assume what they are

It was a good introduction for me to your character which I enjoy a lot. The way you went about taking down someone who greatly outshines you was great plotting on your behalf. It wasn't a "i'll figure it out as the thread progresses" from what I read and it was premeditated and realistic. The pacing was great, though it was a long topic, it wasn't long for no real reason, though at first it seemed that way. Good content, execution could be much better.

Per the Bounty rules, since Shoda was turned over alive, you receive his full bounty as Beli which is 385,470,000 Beli, you receive his weapon, Shusui, then lastly I will give you rewards for the topics quality.

6 Doriki
3 Prestige
and 67,000,000 Bounty.


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44 Re: Bounty Board on Sun May 27, 2018 11:12 am

Name: Golden Hiroko
Participants:Just me

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45 Re: Bounty Board on Sun May 27, 2018 3:07 pm

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@Barlow wrote:Name: Golden Hiroko
Participants:Just me
Godspeed

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